Sep. 8th, 2010 01:05 am
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Title: "Different"
Author: Me
Rating: NC-17
Genre: angst, smut, romance
Pairing: JongHo
Disclaimer: unfortunately don't own them.
Summary: Are "different" people allowed to find happiness? (Still suck at that)

A/N: My second fic and my first smut! Thanks again lovely dongsaengie [info]yesungholic ! She sure is a great help!!!

Not beta-ed, not a native speaker.

Just you know^^ but this fic actually switches from past to presence.

Pls comment. Tell me what you like and what not. I'll try to improve.

"Look at him, what's with that outfit?"
"Disgusting. He has a piercing on his lip. I would never date a guy like that! Gross."
"What's with that weird hair? It's blonde and brown and white? Weird."
"Youth isn't normal anymore. What a disgrace, his poor parents."
Jonghyun was already accustomed to the whispers and stares surrounding him, but that didn't mean he wasn't hurt. Well he wasn't, not anymore, it just brushed off on him.


It was already late and he was on his way back home from practice.
He plays the piano for almost 10 years now, he started when he turned 8.
Walking the same route every day, past the clothing stores, the late night karaoke bars and past that house.
'What is he doing, now?' he thought, staring up at a particular window.


"Hold him up!"
"Hit him harder!" "Hurry, before someone sees" "They wouldn't care anyway"
He was right, they never care. They just walk past him, seeing he was beat up and not doing anything. They never did.
Jonghyun bit his lip to muffle the scream that wanted to leave his lips after a hard blow in his stomach, instead just a pant left him.
He wouldn't scream. They would just enjoy it. He wouldn't grant them the satisfaction.
He could feel himself drift into darkness, the last thing he heard was "Hey, let's rip his piercing off!".
'Shit...' he thought.
Jonghyun felt hands grabbing him, so he would stop fighting. Jonghyun wanted to scream, he wanted someone to save him, but when he felt those cold hands on his lips, he honestly thought he was going to die, right there. He was so scared he blacked out, not feeling anything else.

Jonghyun opened his eyes, confused, not knowing where he was. The last thing he could remember was being grabbed by those guys and them saying they would rip off his piercing. He touched his lip and felt it completely bruised and he couldn't help but feel tears in his eyes. "No way..." He whispered, trying to hold the tears. He didn't even noticed the figure kneeling in front of him.
"You shouldn't cry..." Jonghyun heard. He saw a man looking at him with worried eyes, and he couldn't help but think how handsome this guy was. "W...Who are you?" Jonghyun asked, very confused and too tired to freak out.
Jonghyun saw a small smile coming from the man in front of him. "My name is Minho...I saw what those guys were doing to you...I kinda kicked their bony asses and then brought you to my house." He said smiling and Jonghyun couldn't help but blush. "How do you 'kinda kick their bony asses'?" Jonghyun asked Minho while raising a brow.


"Jongyhun." he gasped as strong arms pulled him by the waist and his back met a well-built chest.
He looked up to the one who embraced him and blushed instantly.
"Baby, why are you standing in the cold? Come on let's go in."

"Uhh...Minho..." Jonghyun panted.
Minho licked the hot shaft of Jonghyuns cock up and down, occasionally taking the tip in his mouth and sucking on it. Loving the sounds his lover made, the trembling and arching of his back.
"Ahh...Minho...don't tease...please. I want you so bad."
"I know babe." He took his member in his mouth, which led to Jonghyun arching his back and moaning his name.
"Ahh Minho...more..." It was so amazing how he knew how to please his lover, how he knew where to touch him to make him moan like crazy.
Minhos head started bobbing up and down, taking Jonghyuns member fully in his mouth, making him moan and pant harder.
"Minho..ahh..Minho...I-I'm going to..." but Minho wouldn't let him cum just yet, he removed his mouth from Jonghyun, drawing a moan of protest from the older boy.
He took Jonghyuns lips in a rough kiss exploring his sweet mouth.
"Minho...I can't wait anymore...please." Jonghyun rubbed himself on Minho, who let out a deep growl.
"Baby..." Minho said with lustful eyes staring at his lover.
He pulled him into a rough kiss and thurst into him.
Jonghyuns scream got muffled in Minhos mouth, he dug his nails in Minhos broad shoulders and thightened around Minho.
"Ugh, Jonghyun...so thight...relax, baby" He trailed Jonghyuns jawline with kisses.
Jonghyun seemed to relax a little "Move."
Minho pulled out and thurst into him again, making Jonghyun moan in pleasure.
"Ahhh Minho...uuhh" He pulled Minho down into a sloppy kiss as he still thursts into Jonghyun.
"Harder..Minho" Minho thursts harder, his thursts comming irregular, feeling his stomach thighten, awaiting his orgasm.
"Ahhh..ahhh..Minho!!" Jonghyun screamed as he orgasms hard thightening around Minho and bringing him to the edge.
A few thursts more and he joins his lover with his own orgasm, spilling his hot seed into Jonghyun.
He falls on top of Jonghyun stroking his hair and trying to catch his breath.

"Minho...I love you." Jonghyun said after catching his breath.
"I love you too baby."
"I was afraid I never would find anybody to love me."
"I'm glad you didn't...not until I came into your life."
"I'm glad you are differend Minho."
"I'm glad we are different Jonghyun." 

Ugh crappy smut..sorry v.v

Date: 2010-09-07 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
SPOT! yesungholic thanks sweetie <3

Date: 2010-09-07 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
SPOT! kurokitsune09 cuz she deserved it! <3

Date: 2010-09-07 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
Yay!Yay!Yay!Yay! Spot for me!!! <333333

zomg!!! Jonghyun was beaten up!! But at Minho saves the day!! (cackles and glomps the two of them) A little bit of odd tense changes but it's fine bb. ^^

*cries* the smut was short unnie. it should be longer. *nods*

Date: 2010-09-07 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Yeah he was...*hates herself, cries* T^T I'm sorry Jjoooong~

You mean the tense in my grammer? I know...hahaha xD sorry...that's my weak point in englisch xD and I have no beta an ugh..xD

*cries with you* I know right?! But ..I was so embarrassed to write it..xD it's my first time and it's awkward and I don't like it!


Date: 2010-09-07 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
I actually wrote "englisch" <--german..sorry..xD it should be "english"

Date: 2010-09-07 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
*hands unnie tissues* Don't feel bad Unnie! Minho still saved the day!! *beams* I'd totally beta for you if I was a little bit better. Some times I get weird grammar tense issues too. *hugs*

I've never written smut yet and I don't know if I ever will. lol. ^^

Date: 2010-09-07 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
*blows nose* ..gross D:

Yeah he did!! Good job Minho!

Hahaha I'm sure you're a lot better than I am. xD tell me if you don't mind beta-ing. so yeah.

I love smut. I love your fics. Would be a great combination! But you fics are still awesome withouth smut!!
Writing it is a lot ..more difficult than reading..xD yeah..so it turned out awkward as you see. haha

Date: 2010-09-07 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
I don't mind beta-ing. I really don't. (avoids snot infested tissues) XDDD

I'm okay honestly. ^^U I try. I bet they would but I dunno how well they'd turn out. So...maybe a little bit later? I think it'd totally be easier to read smut than to write it. at least for me. haha. ^^

Date: 2010-09-07 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Great! So, how will we do that? o.o do you have msn? xD
(hahaha surryyy~~~ xDD)

You have to try^^ this fic was just going to be a normal one..but while I chatted with yesungholic it turned into smut..with her help xD so ..yeah..just try.

For me it's the same. :D

Date: 2010-09-07 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
hm...nope. to the MSN. I've got skype though. and yahoo. or you can jsut email it to me or something.

I think that will come a lot later *blush*

Date: 2010-09-07 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Ugh..just now when my comp doesn't accept skype anymore!!

Guess we'll have to stick to mails.

I'll pm you mine.

hehe :D we'll see. I'll wait. xD

Date: 2010-09-08 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
pm'd you back with my email. didja get it?

Date: 2010-09-08 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Yep, I got it! :D

Date: 2010-09-07 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
SPOT! crazyoverbishie cuz I promised.

Date: 2010-09-08 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazyoverbishie.livejournal.com
well..thk you...^^
i almost make a new reply...then i saw this^^

you know the '-----------------' making me think of some hidden story...^^

this is good...the smut is not crappy...i like its length too...i cant imagine if it ever be longer than this,,,,its not like i mind reading longer pieces...but i dont know if i will like it more than now...^^

like it really^^
surry i couldnt give you any concrit...>.<...my english fail me...^^

pls do write more...ill be waiting for more pieces from you^^

Date: 2010-09-08 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
I said I would spot for you. Hehe

Haha, really?? It was just to cut the parts. hehe cuz they switch the time.

You think so? Thanks!
Well, I'm still new to writing and maybe smut was a level too high for me, but I wanted to try and oh well^^.

My english isn't any better! *sigh*

hehe I'll try, thanks for reading and commenting <3

Date: 2010-09-08 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazyoverbishie.livejournal.com
thk you^^

i know that...i just love to imagine if there were a scene...XD

yeah i think so^^
just keep writing more^^

you're welcome^^

Date: 2010-09-08 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shan-ah-non.livejournal.com
OMG. Major eww if Jonghyun did get a mouth piercing.

Though this was HOT. 8D

Date: 2010-09-08 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Haha.. thanks xD

Well, I was just fed up with some ignorant people. Cuz..humans with piercings are humans too you know xD
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Date: 2010-09-08 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Jjong would be able to pull off anything! haha I love him :3

Awwww. Thanks bb! I'll try my best!! <3

Date: 2010-09-08 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com
teehee. I have a lip ring, so jjong having it kind of looked HOT. XD

awww jongho, so sweet. YEY!

Date: 2010-09-08 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com
and er. I have 15 piercings if you're interested to know. wahahaha. XD (kind of OOC for someone who's into bright and shiny which is SHINee. XD)

Date: 2010-09-08 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
I have a lip ring too!
And well it does look hot. I'm sure it would xD

WOW 15? That's awesome!! haha :D

I'm not just into Kpop^^ but into Jrock as well..soooo it's quite the contrast, but I like both and why not? hehe^^

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-08 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com

actually more of into VKEI. really. my kpop fandom's only SHINee and some UKISS and SuJu but my life revolves around Vkei!!! ^_^

and hello there fellow lip ring owner! ^_^

Date: 2010-09-08 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
YAY VKei is good too!
For me it's SHINee and TVXQ, but I listen to a lot^^

hehe my lip ring got inspired by the guitar-god MIYAVII!!!! hahahah xD

Date: 2010-09-10 12:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com
OH GOD ME TOO!!! miyavi's like my first love (though i started with gackt~)

I also have Miyavi's lip ring, the black loop thingie. XD

Date: 2010-09-10 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
OH MY GOD!!! Me too!! Hahaha first Gackt, then Miyavi~~~♥

I have his lip ring too!! The black loop with sharp ends xDD awesome!

Date: 2010-09-10 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com

we are awesome. *hugs*

Date: 2010-09-10 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
IKR!? We are hahaha~
Gonna buy the Girugämesh Hoodie now!


Date: 2010-09-10 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
It's awesome right?? hahaha you gotta order/buy it!!! Soooo amazing! hahaha


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