Bliss

Sep. 6th, 2010 07:41 pm
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Title: "Bliss"
Author: Me
Rating: PG
Genre: fluff, angst
Pairing: JongHo
Disclaimer: unfortunately don't own them.
Summary: Two people love each other, but they don't know how the other one feels. They are separated and when they find each other again, what will happen? (ugh sorry..I suck at that)

A/N: Well, this is my first fic...my first time writing anything o.o. JongHo is my OTP so my first fic is for them!!

I had a lot of help from my beloved dongsaengie [info]yesungholic !  Dongsaengie thanks for your help! without you I wouldn't have had the courage to post this!
She actually helped me write some parts, guess which they are? They are better, you can tell xD
This was inspired by her fic "It started with a drink" if you haven't read it yet shame on you go read it! It's awesome!

I'm not a native speaker, so sorry for any errors. 
Don't hate on me if you don't like..xD sorry..my first time and I think it lacks something.
Please comment, wanna know everyones opinion and improve.




 "Minho, you look a little strange." Minho looked to his side and saw his hyung and best friend looking at him with a worried look. "Well, I mean stranger than usual." He said with a mocking tone making Minho roll his eyes but couldn't help but smile a little. "You're so not funny Jonghyun-hyung."
"So, whats wrong Minho, tell your Hyung?" Minho kept silent for a few minutes. Jonghyun thought he wouldn't answer, when Minho started talking. "I think I'm in love." "...Isn't that great?! Why that long face? Who is she?" "..." "Minho?" "It's a guy, his name is Taemin" Jonghyun was shocked for a moment and then fell into silence. "I-I see! Well, it's still great isn't it?!" "..." "I'll help you get him!" "Eh?!"


'That where still happy times' Minho thought.
He lost himself in his thoughts, when suddenly a hand squeezed his shoulder.
"You are thinking about Jonghyun again, aren't you?" Kibum said.
Minho sighed and burried his face in his hands "I can't help it."
Of course Kibum could tell Minho, that Jonghyun would return to Seoul from Vienna next month, but why shouldn't he let Minho suffer a little more?
It was him who used Jonghyun to get Taemin, all the while not realizing his or Jonghyuns feelings.
The time Minho realized he loved Jonghyun and not Taemin, Jonghyun was already in Vienna. Trying to heal his broken heart with music.
Thats right, Kibum will let Minho suffer a little more and then he'll make both Minho and Jonghyun happy, so he hasn't got to endure this lifeless Minho for the rest of his life.


"Kibum!" Jonghyun threw himself in the open arms of the slightly taller boy.
"aw, Jjong, I missed you so much!" that said, he squeezed the older boys breath out of him.
"ugh, Bummie, you're killing me"
"ah, sorry!" they heard a little chuckle
"aw, you two are so cute"
"shut up Jinki, come and welcome Jjong back"
"of course! Welcome back in Seoul Jonghyun"
"thanks hyung, I'm finally back"

The three boys left the airport and went straight to Jonghyuns and Kibums shared apartment.


After dinner they left the dishes to Jinki and Kibum pulled Jonghyun in the bedroom.
"so, what now?"
"eh, what do you mean?" Jonghyun eyed his best friend with a confused look on his face.
"come on Jjong, you know what I mean!" when his best friend still didn't seem to understand, he just simply said "Minho".
Jonghyuns confused face changed into a pained one, seeing that Kibum couldn't help but give a sad, knowing smile "you still love him, right Jjong"
"I can't keep anything from you, can I?"
"I'm not called allmighty for nothing, Jjong" Kibum said softly.
"..."
"you know, he loves you, too"
"no...he loves Taemin"
"no, they broke up shortly after you left."
"eh? but...but Minho he.."
"shh, he loves you, thats all you need to know and I won't allow you two to be sad the rest of your lives"
"Kibum..."
"you can thank me by being out at least 3 hours a day" Kibum said
Jonghyun giggled "I wouldn't want to be here, even if you didn't tell me to leave" 'I don't want to see disturbing scences of my best friend and his lover' he thought to himself.


Minho was again in his own world, when Kibum approached him.
Kibum sighed "Yah, Choi Minho!" Minho didn't seem to hear him though.
Kibum stops the urge to kick the ass of his junior and just shakes him violently
"wha..what..oh, Kibum-hyung, it's you" Minho said rather disapointed
"yeah, just me, you wanted a naked Jonghyun in front of you?" Kibum said sarcastically
Minho gave him an irritated look and looked away.
"he's here"
"who?"
"Jonghyun"
"sure.."
"he really is"
"..."
"you want him right? So you have to trust me. Tonight..at 7pm..in my apartment, make sure you come"
"..."
Minho couldn't trust his ears..Jonghyun? His Jonghyun came back from vienna??
He couldn't help the butterflies in his stomach flying chaotically.
Neither could he help his stupid smile, that took over his face the whole day.


It was a rather awkward atmoshphere, everyone was busy eating dinner.
Jinki sometimes tried to brighten the atmosphere, but ended embarrassing himself, like he had some kind of condition.
After dinner Jinki and Kibum took over the task to wash dishes, wich left Minho and Jonghyun in the living room watching TV and occasionally stealing glances at each other.
They didn't even notice that Jinki and Kibum left, they were too busy with each others presence.
"how where you these past 7 months?" Jonghyun asked.
Minho could have lied and told him he was fine, but he just couldn't.
"Minho?" Jonghyun was now facing his junior.
"..."
"Minho...?" Jonghyun placed his hand on his shoulder.
The younger man couldn't take it anymore, he pulled Jonghyun in a thight embrace, which cought the older one off guard and he gasped.
"Minho...what.."
"I love you, hyung" Minho said, squeezing him more.
"Eh...Minho..."
"I love you, I really do..I'm sorry. I realized it too late, it's my fault and I-I" his voice broke and he started crying.
Jonghyun hugged Minho back "you idiot..don't cry.."
"..."
Jonghyun could feel Minhos tears in the crook of his neck "I love you too, idiot"
Minho couldn't believe what he heard.
"Really??" he now faced Jonghyun and looked him straight in the eyes.
Instead of answering Jonghyun leaned over and kissed Minho.
At first Minho didn't know what to do, but then he just let his instincts take over and kissed him back.
They stayed like that for who knows how long, just kissing, embracing, snuggling and whispering nothings in each others ears.

Now they knew, they were made for each other and nobody could take this new found bliss from them.

Date: 2010-09-06 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
SPOT yesungholic
Thanks, sweetie <3

Date: 2010-09-06 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yesungholic.livejournal.com
this was so cute <3
Kibum is so evil! Letting Minho suffer like that!
but he did deserved it.
you have to write more <3

Date: 2010-09-06 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Thanks, sweetie! <3

Yeah he is..who else is gonna protect Jjong?

He so deserved it..my poor Jjong!!

I'll try bb! Hehe you gotta help me sometimes! :P You're great!

Date: 2010-09-06 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com
Spot for me!

left a spot for you on my updated fic.

Date: 2010-09-06 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Take it, you ninja :O

Thanks~ hehe

Date: 2010-09-06 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com
THAT WAS SWEET.

kibum is a sly kid.

poor taemin though.

but meh. im biased so YEY JONGHO!

Date: 2010-09-06 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Hehe glad you liked it!

Yeah he is right! keke

Taemin? ...honestly..I didn't think about him..while writing this..xD but I guess yeah..poor him? haha I don't caaaaaaaaaare JONGHO!! xD

Date: 2010-09-06 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paranoiascreams.livejournal.com
teehee, i do that too. Like,i dont care who ill hurt. THERE'S JONGHO.

and yey. you like the gazette too! (my first ever fic was Aoi x Uruha, when i read it again it's funny and weird. I think ive improved alot.)

Date: 2010-09-06 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Yeah! There just has to be JongHo haha :D

Gazette ❤ :D ah they are great!

I think for me it will be the same..xD like..now I think "yaay I did it wooooow" and in a few months when I have written more (I hope) I'll be like "wth..how could I have posted this" xD

Date: 2010-09-06 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazyoverbishie.livejournal.com
SPOT!

Ill be back to read and comment ^^

*sleeps*

Date: 2010-09-06 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazyoverbishie.livejournal.com
ok i lied..i couldnt sleep so i end up reading anyway....

wwhhooaa..this was good...XXDD

hahahahah..so you decided to sent Jonghyun to Vienna too..XXXDD

i hope to read more from you^^

Date: 2010-09-06 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
aw. Don't be exhausted tommorow!

*phew* glad you liked it! Thanks!!

Yeah! For me it's just plausible! Jonghyun loves music! Music = Vienna! xD

Can I call you Unnie? You would be my first, *sigh* I'm so old!

I hope to write more! I'll spot for you <3

Date: 2010-09-06 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazyoverbishie.livejournal.com
ill try^^

you're welcome^^

hahahaha...just throw him to Vienna...XD

hee?? arent you call me that already??? well i cant say no...im older though...

pls do write more...you dont have to...but thk you^^

p.s. XXDD...Ruki at Cassis Era....XXDDD...GOSH I LOVE THAT MV SOSOOO FREAKING MUCH..URUHA LOOKS ESP. BEAUTIFUL THERE.....XXDDD

Date: 2010-09-06 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
No I never asked you. haha

Yeah! So hot! I'll cut and dye my hair just like that!! Ruki-style xD

Date: 2010-09-06 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
All yours dongsaeng!
Aw..didn't know so many wanted to read..would have left spots.

Date: 2010-09-06 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
kekeke. It's Jongho Unnie!! I'm totally going to be here. ^^ That was cute!! Well, kind of angsty in the beginning but still cute!! Taeminnie and Minho are awesome but I'm a fan for Jongho so I'm happy they broke up...kinda. As long as my other SHINee bias wasn't hurt that bad.

*maybe he found love in Sulli? (is hopeful)*

haha. The ending was sweet and cute and *glomps unnie*

I hope to see more from you Unnie!! ^^

Date: 2010-09-06 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
You liked it? That's a reliev..I was kinda worried.
Allright I'll spot you on my fics from now on :D

Yeah angsty..I can't keep angst up, it hurts xD

I'm sure Sulli will be by Taemins side! He can't go totally empty-handed out of this story. xD

Yeah..fluff overload!! :D haha *hugs*

If I got any ideas, I'll try writing them :D
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Date: 2010-09-06 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
yay for future spots!! <33333

course i liked it!! it was good!!

Angst is sad and it does hurt. I keep wondering if I should write one. It's a Jongho one and all I've got right now is the line, "It's been 3 fucking years and just when I'm almost over you, you come prancing back into my life!"

anyways, yay for the Sulli-Taemin!! I love those two so much. They're so cute!

*hugs*

Yay for future fics!!

Date: 2010-09-06 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
btw. how do you change the comments so it's that bar thing? *points up to your uh..."hidden" comment*

Date: 2010-09-06 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Haha you're so cute ❤

Well I'll read it regardless of my angst-hate xD doesn't make sense.
But that line sounds good <3 and it could switch to a happy ending!

hehe I just read SulTae(?) in your fic. It's the first time xD and it's cute!


And er..which comment do you mean? the one under my comment for you? I deleted it..cuz..I thought I made an error in the comment, so I replied to it with the supposed right word..but realized it was wrong, so I deleted it..ugh embarrassing xD

Date: 2010-09-06 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
oohh. Well, that's okay, about the comment thing. I kind of want to collapse some of my comments so people don't have to scroll down forever you know? ^^

Thank you for thinking I'm cute. I've gotten so many people telling me that and I seriously don't get it. >_< I'm just me. ^^

SulTae, TaeLi, it's universal for me. But I dunno which one is their official name. lol.

Thanks!! I hope it becomes a happy fic when I get around to sorting it out. ^^

Date: 2010-09-06 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
haha sorry, bb can't help with that one. I seriously don't even get how to hide the link in JongHo that leads to this fic under a sentence..xD so it's quite ugly.

I guess it has to be true if so many tell you that :3

Gotta read it when it's finished :D

Date: 2010-09-06 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
awwww let's find out how to sort out livejournal together kay unnie? *glomps*

I dunno. I guess? X3 But I love my friends, even if they think something of me that I think i'm not. lol.

I'll save you a spot when it's done. I don't mind you ninja-ing Unnie but wait until I put a spot for you? *hugs*

Date: 2010-09-06 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Sure! But you already know how to do it. that's not fair! xD *huggles*

Well..my friends think a lot of me I'm not..well I think I'm not..xD

Ugh. It was on impulse..sorry ahaha xD I'll wait like a good Unnie :P

Date: 2010-09-06 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurokitsune09.livejournal.com
Not really. I'm okay with it I guess. XD But there's this icon that looks like globe with a chain or something at the bottom corner, that's the icon to link a link with. I usually just type something then use that to link the entry. *beams, imaginary tail wagging behind like a puppy*

Don't worry about the impulse. I'm just honored that you like stalk my journal or something, waiting for updates. ^^ I hope to update soon!! *giggles*

Date: 2010-09-06 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Ugh it confuses me..I'll try it though. xD

*puppy pat*

Hehehe now I'm a stalker! :D why not, stalking is fun xD
I hope too! :D and I hope you found the missing bunnys when you update!
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Date: 2010-09-07 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
aaw, glad you liked it!

Thanks for commenting, I'll try my best <3

Date: 2010-09-07 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eris-kira.livejournal.com
This is sweet! Kibum is evil but Minho deserved it!
Yay for JongHo! Keep writing~

Date: 2010-09-07 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Haha, thanks for reading and liking!

Yeah, he so deserved it!

I'll try my best! <3

Date: 2010-09-07 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dhgal.livejournal.com
I'm gonna get cavities!!!So sweet...omo...omo...

XD Key being key ^^poor Taemin but someone's gotta sacrifice XD

Date: 2010-09-07 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
Haha that's not good!

Yeah, someone always has to. xD

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-08 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolatery.livejournal.com
I desire JongHo as well! :D

Please do write more JongHo! And it's a good thing Key made Minho suffer nyarharhar. <3

Date: 2010-09-08 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
YAY for JongHo!

It so is! He deserved it hrhrhrhr xD

Thanks for reading and commenting. <33

Date: 2010-10-18 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluemonkeyrain.livejournal.com
Well, I'm certainly glad Minho discovered his feelings for Jonghyun. Wouldn't want to make Jonghun suffer any longer!

The ending was so sweet! :D

Date: 2010-10-18 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaisa-forehba.livejournal.com
I'm glad too! :D

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3
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